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Tears roll down her cheeks
and he kisses them away lovingly;
she flinches warily from his touch.
He takes her chin between his fingers,
turning her face up to his own.
Don't look at me.
Her beautiful blue eyes swim.
He is confused.
Why not, darling?
A sob wracks her body,
along with a fresh wave of tears.
I'm ugly.
His eyes fill with loving concern.
You're not ugly.
He leans closer -
a soft gasp escapes her -
their faces inches apart.
You're beautiful, baby.
He kisses her soft lips,
and for the first time in her life
she feels utterly beautiful.
Thank you, Sweet Boy. ♥
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DJ-3ND3R Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I almost felt like crying because this is so well written. <3
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JazzmineRouco Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2012
Beautiful and loving. I cried inside reading this.
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MyPaperHear-t Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
One word. Beautiful <3
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PurpleLullaby Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
This one's so great! I cried on the inside :)
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SweetsAndCharades Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012
Lovely :aww:
Reminds me of something I wrote years ago, though the theme wasn't the same.
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NinARinkA Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'd like to experience something like this someday xD
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ColdBlackRaven Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It was lovely :heart: I would like to see something more detailed though ^^; Loved this <3
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silenoswithaleopard Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
:hmm: It's a nice verse and I'm sure there are those who can relate but... what about something a little more empowering?
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divafica Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
:nod:
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