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Tears roll down her cheeks
and he kisses them away lovingly;
she flinches warily from his touch.
He takes her chin between his fingers,
turning her face up to his own.
Don't look at me.
Her beautiful blue eyes swim.
He is confused.
Why not, darling?
A sob wracks her body,
along with a fresh wave of tears.
I'm ugly.
His eyes fill with loving concern.
You're not ugly.
He leans closer -
a soft gasp escapes her -
their faces inches apart.
You're beautiful, baby.
He kisses her soft lips,
and for the first time in her life
she feels utterly beautiful.
Thank you, Sweet Boy. ♥
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DJ-3ND3R Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I almost felt like crying because this is so well written. <3
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JazzmineRouco Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2012
Beautiful and loving. I cried inside reading this.
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MyPaperHear-t Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
One word. Beautiful <3
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PurpleLullaby Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
This one's so great! I cried on the inside :)
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SweetsAndCharades Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012
Lovely :aww:
Reminds me of something I wrote years ago, though the theme wasn't the same.
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NinARinkA Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'd like to experience something like this someday xD
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ColdBlackRaven Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It was lovely :heart: I would like to see something more detailed though ^^; Loved this <3
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silenoswithaleopard Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
:hmm: It's a nice verse and I'm sure there are those who can relate but... what about something a little more empowering?
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divafica Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
:nod:
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Svitavotara Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012
Absolutely lovely!
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KJ-Illustration Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Very beautiful indeed :heart:
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arachnidsGrip8 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Gorgeous
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EmperorIke Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012
Faving this is about the only comment I can really find...
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OneoOneo Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012  Professional General Artist
Oh wow this is so original! I love it! <3

Where do you get your sense of humour from?
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Scootie-chan Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful poem~<3
The depth of it is very well done, and it's quite realistic. ^^
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Nelithios Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012
amazing imagery =]
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Dino-Mario Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Lovely poem
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ChristineWay18 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
god this is beautiful, and exactly how i feel...
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dessiechan Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm glad you like it. > // <
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ChristineWay18 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
:D
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HinnaStar Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012  Hobbyist
Beautiful. :'3
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dessiechan Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much. :meow:
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ArtofDezzy Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012
wow i love it ..... reminds me of my ex :( i miss him so much
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dessiechan Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Awh, I'm sorry. :noes:
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ArtofDezzy Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012
Yeah its his moms fault too. She didnt like me so she told him lies and he dumped me cause of her.all because i am white
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dessiechan Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm terribly sorry to hear that. :hug: My boyfriend's mother has tried to break us up before, but it thankfully hasn't worked.
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ArtofDezzy Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012
he is a mommas boy so i worked.. why did she try to break you two up?
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dessiechan Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Because we live so far away. She probably thinks I'm not good enough for her son.
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ArtofDezzy Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012
oh well that sucks i am sorry i am glad that you stayed together but yeah he made me feel so beautiful and special. so i know what your poem feels like but at the same time me sort of makes me cry
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dessiechan Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I didn't mean to make anyone cry. :c
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insomatic Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012
Wow, this poem is utterly beautiful,and a sweet dedication too :)
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dessiechan Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much. ^ ^
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